Nano Midnight Write-in: First and Last lines of last night

First line of midnight: “I need to get to Ashbury.”

Last line, when I was beginning to get groggy, that very much needs a re-write:

The bar was across the walkway from the repair shop, just down the way from Emilia’s shop.

1,769 words last night!

People that need naming:

“So.  Who brought you over the mountains?”

 “[Name name.]  He’s one of the ones that told me about you.  He said…” 

“You could take [name name 2]’s airship, certainly. But I thought you wanted to get to Hours-March.”

And a town:

<span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;
font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:
Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;
mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;
mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA”>…  So four hundred [town town] dollars,…"
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;
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mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;
mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA”>
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;
font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:
Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;
mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;
mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA”>

<span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;
font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:
Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;
mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;
mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA”> Extant names are: Emilia, Ashbury, Hours-March, Mortin (Mortin subject to change; the last three are places).

Wheee!

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