I’ve started on what will be my next Addergoole story for Camp Nano:
Fernley sh’Kendra and the Case of the Missing Orders
As if Fernley’s first year at the Addergoole School wasn’t going badly enough, suddenly his orders are going missing. Which would be fine, if that meant he didn’t still have to follow him. Or that his Master – and how had he ended up with a Master, anyway? – wouldn’t still get angry at him.
It’s going to be a long year if he doesn’t figure this out.
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My last line last night:
“Don’t worry.” The voice cooed over the chanting. “You won’t feel a thing. At least, not for long.”
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I’m not sure about the names. Current Kept/Keeper are Fernley/Fishel. I’m a lot less sure about Fishel than Fernley, but I’m not totally set on Fernley, either, esp. for a title character. Thoughts?
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And I could use ~3 alpha readers for this as well. Volunteers?
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Please, may I?
Always and of course 😀
Thank you!
Oho! This is sounding most intriging.
Is that “I want to read this when you serialize/publish it” or “I want to alpha” or both?
Yes. 🙂 No real alpha experience, but everyone starts somewhere, right?
I’ll add you to the filters then
I would love to but am not sure I’ll have time to read promptly, much less comment.
What would you need an alpha-reader to do? If it is something that I can manage I would be up for it.
(Before October) read over the posted chapters (not posted yet, i mean, when I post them) for gross typos, plot holes, confusing things. … also for awesome moments and things you really like.
I could do that – health permitting, of course.
Of course! I’ll add you to the filter. there’s only one segment up so far, though.
Okay! Want to link me to it in case I miss it on my Friends/Reading List?
http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/680989.html http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/681866.html http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/682054.html http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/682288.html
Thank you. I will read as I can.
Whenever you have time! Thanks.