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Meat of the Matter, a story of Rin & Girey

Loosely, after Enemy, before View-point (And many of the small stories in between will have to be re-ordered as I go.

Note to self: figure out military ranks and units).

Their long weeks in the mountains had finally spat them out into a long, green valley, just above a small settlement. They were both quiet, contemplative or just sick of hearing their own voices, and tired enough to be nodding in the saddles. They hadn’t even fought in days; they’d gotten too worn for that.

Small as it was, the town would likely have some sort of inn. An inn would mean food she didn’t have to cook over a fire, or watch Girey burn over the same fire, food that wasn’t dried tack and dried bread with dried fruit for flavor. She leaned forward over her saddle, not surprised to see Girey doing the same thing. Some things were just in a soldier’s veins, no matter the army or the nation. Food, a bed, a roof, those would spur them on like a goat to grain.

They goaded their goats faster as the hill began to level out, and then faster still as the smells of cooking meat reached their noses, until they were racing down the hill, galloping, pressed against their tired goats’ necks as if they were riding for their lives.

As the path widened into the flat road of town, they slowed, whooping and laughing, panting in exhaustion as sudden as their surge of energy had been. “I haven’t ridden like that in…” Rin fell quiet at Girey’s sudden, silent frown, and turned to follow his gaze. “Ah.”

They weren’t the first to reach this valley as a way-station from the war, it seemed. Tents were pitched in the town square and, against the hitching post of the tavern, several Bitrani prisoners were chained. More prisoners moved among the tents, and, to the side of the road, an officer was talking quietly with a townswoman, a potter by her dress, while another prisoner, this one a woman, stood nearby, shackled, waiting.

Girey’s gaze was still on those chained to the hitching post, and his eyes had narrowed, his hands clenched into fists. Rin, carefully, set a hand on his forearm, above the shackles. “Let’s get a room,” she suggested in Bitrani, gesturing at the inn across the street from the tavern.

He jerked as if he’d been slapped, and then, slowly, looked down at the chain between his wrists and nodded. “A room.”

“Once we’re settled,” she offered, still speaking in his native tongue, and quietly, “we can take a walk through the town.”

He glanced at her, looking like he was trying to guess at her motives. “We could,” he agreed reluctantly in the same language. He looked as if he was about to continue with a refusal when, somewhere in the camp, someone cried out in pain. His hands and jaw clenched again, and he nodded, slowly. “We should.”

His silence had a new tone to it as they took their room – not a great room, not even a good room, but it had a wide straw ticking of bed, the sheets looked and smelled clean, and it came with a hip-bath of warm water. They both cleaned up, not looking at each other, not speaking to one another. Rin wondered how angry he was going to get and, if he decided to throw a fit, how far she’d have to go to stop him. In a tiny, rebellious part of her mind, she wondered how far she’d be willing to go, if it came to that.

“Are you going to tell me they’re not my people anymore?” His voice was like a rasp, raw and pained, his consonants sharp. “That Girey of Tugia has no concern for Bitrani prisoners?”

She buttoned her qitari and clipped her rank-pin on the button band. “Girey of Tugia,” she answered slowly, “would of course be concerned for other Bitrani. Especially if there were any from Tugia there – which would be a little problematic to you, of course.”

“Of course,” he grumbled.

“But Rin the healer, you may have noticed, concerns herself with healing prisoners as well as with her countrymen.”

“I’ve noticed that,” he muttered. “Why are we talking about ourselves like this?”

“Because we’re talking about what we’re putting forth, not who we are. And I’m putting forth something that will let you check on the well-being of your countrymen.”

“Why?”

“Because you care. And because I care.”

“Fine,” he grumbled. “Let’s go.”

The folk in the inn stared blatantly at Girey, and muttered into their drinks. The Ossulunders had been more polite about it, and, so close to the border, he hadn’t stood out. Here, he was taller than almost everyone in the meal hall, and lighter-haired. The stares made him stand up taller, raise his chin, push his shoulders back, and meet their gazes levelly and arrogantly. He looked, Rin mused, like a Prince.

If the townsfolk in the inn saw that, or if they saw her rank insignia, or if they simply saw two tired, cranky soldiers and decided to leave well enough alone, they came, as a group, to a conclusion that the two of them were not to be bothered, and got out of their way.

Taking full advantage of this, Rin led the way back into the town, past the prisoners at the hitching post, past the townswoman now talking carefully in small, loud words to the captive, past the front tents of the encampment. The prisoners’ tent would be obvious, as it always was, from the smell.

They were stopped before they reached it. “Can I help you… Healer?”

The soldier that stopped them was clean, smooth-shaven, with trimmed hair and shiny buttons on his qitari. Rin read his rank – none to speak of – and answered brusquely. “We’re here to see the prisoners.”

“You’re not part of our unit…” he hesitated.

“Since when has a healer needed to be?”

“And that prisoner isn’t one of our shipment.”

“No. He’s my private captive. Take me to see the prisoners.”

“Yes, Lady Healer.” He nodded and walked backwards towards the tent for a few steps. “Are you from the front?”

“I am.”

“Not with your unit?”

“I was released from duty on the signing of the surrender. I’m making my own way home. And your unit?”

“We were the clean-up crew.” He looked a little embarrassed at that. “We arrived in time to escort the prisoners north.” Girey, next to her, was tense but silent. She spared him a glance, to be sure he wasn’t going to blow up. He met her eyes and ducked his chin a finger’s-width.

“Where are you taking them?”

“We’re spreading them out among the towns and villages, people who can use the help and can afford the crown’s price. Here’s the tent.” He opened the flap for her, standing back from the smell, and told the soldier at the entrance – just as shiny and clean as he was – “the Healer is here to examine the prisoners.”

“That gets you in everywhere,” Girey muttered in a whisper of Bitrani.

“That’s the idea,” she answered the same way. “I’m useful everywhere.”

And in this tent, as everywhere else, her use was needed. She looked around in the dark, feeling rather than really seeing the prisoners, tense and waiting, and then stuck her head back out the flap. “Air this place out. It stinks to the sky in there.”

“Yes, Lady Healer.” The soldier opened the flap, and then circled the ancient structure to open the back as well, letting in light and air, and letting out a few too many flies for Rin’s peace of mind.

“Get me some watered wine,” she barked, “and a basin of washing-water, as well.”

Girey knelt by the first prisoner, a low noise of anger rumbling up in his throat. “Filthy conditions,” he muttered in Bitrani.

“Can you say your people treated prisoners better?” she countered quietly. He had no answer for her, there. And, indeed, although the prisoners were dirty, most of the stink came from fear, not from filth.

She spent an hour in the tent, healing what needed healing, and cleaning what needed cleaning. The prisoners were, to her eye and nose, dirty, frightened, and uncertain, but in as good of health as could be expected, given the terrain and the march there.

Girey spoke to them as she healed them, their voices low, the conversation furtive and uncertain. They didn’t know what was happening to them. They didn’t think that the Callanthe kept slaves. They worried they were going to be sacrificed to some pagan god.

Girey soothed their fears as much as he could – as far as he knew, the Callanthe still worshipped the Three. He did not think they engaged in human sacrifice off the battlefield. His own shackles were proof that they kept prisoners, and his cleanliness was proof that the filth was not necessarily going to last forever.

When they were done, Rin swaying on her feet a bit, they left the tent open and sought out an officer, leaving the well-shaven young soldiers behind.

The officer was, perhaps unsurprisingly, in the tavern, speaking with a few of what looked like the better-off townsfolk. Two more prisoners stood shackled behind him, clearly not following the conversation and just as clearly nervous. All of them looked up when Rin and Girey entered.

“Healer…?” the legate began, politely enough.

“Healer Rin,” she introduced herself. “Second legion, fifth century, although I have been discharged.”

“I heard you were taking care of our prisoners.”

“Yes, sir. They are in fairly good shape, if in need of a bath.”

“Something I see your captive isn’t wanting for. You found yourself a pretty one, didn’t you?”

She wondered how long Girey would continue to pretend not to know the language. “He’s quite handsome,” she agreed. “I’m lucky I stumbled over him.”

“And not the other way around. These people are monsters to our women.”

“I’ve heard the rumors. These captives you have here, are they guilty of that?”

“These? No, of course not. We executed the rapists on the spot, and most of the other criminal sorts. These are surrendered soldiers and officers.”

She nodded; she’d expected as much, but best to get it out there. “What are you doing with them, then?”

“Now that we’re far enough from the former border to avoid flight risks, we’re selling them to families and businesses who can use an extra hand. The Army can always use the money.”

It was a truism as old as “rain is wet,” but he smirked like he’d said something clever, so Rin smiled back at him. “They’re nervous, sir, your captives. They don’t know what’s going on.”

“You speak Bithrain?” His look went from lazy to sharp in a heartbeat, and Rin cursed inwardly. Nobles and high-ranking officers might be fluent in Bitrani, but not so many of the rank and file were.

“My captive knows some Callenian,” she hedged. “He was speaking to the prisoners while I healed them.”

“Aah.” He sank back, disappointed. “Was hoping I could requisition your services. Not one of my soldiers speaks more Bithrain than ‘where’s the privy?’”

“The Bitrani who lived near the border often know more Callenian than they let on. Let me have my captive talk to them, let them know what’s going on, and I’ll see if I can get one of them to admit to some Callenian.”

“That sounds like an idea,” he admitted grudgingly. “Or I could requisition him, instead. He looks like he’s noble, he can probably read and write, or at least keep numbers.”

She felt Girey tense next to her, but she was rather busy being tense, herself. “The terms of enlistment for Healers and other specialists allows for war trophies, sir,” she answered carefully. If he made her pull rank, things would likely get very messy all around.

“Yes, but in times of war, an officer may requisition property to assist the war effort,” the man countered smoothly. Rin opened her mouth, trying to come up with a counterargument to that that wouldn’t lead to more trouble.

“Not war now,” the Bitrani woman behind the man said in careful, slow Callanthe. “Surrender signed.”

“There you have it.” She suppressed the urge to whoop; it wouldn’t be polite. “We are no longer at war, however long the peace may last. And you have your translator. Unless you’ve already sold her?”

“As a matter of fact…” the townsman began, but the officer was ripping up the paperwork.

“No, no we haven’t.” He turned to the woman. “You translate?”

She spoke to Girey in rapid Bitrani, and he answered just as quickly. Although Rin considered herself a fluent speaker, even she had trouble following along, especially while pretending not to understand.

“This woman wants to keep you, your Grace. Do you wish to be kept? If you don’t, I can suddenly get stupid and not follow their silly language anymore, and this fathead here will requisition you.”

“Is he a fair fathead, at least?”

“As rabbits roasting on the fire go, his belly will crackle nicely.”

Girey glanced at Rin, and a little smile crossed his lips. “This one has more meat. Translate as you will.”

The woman turned back to the officer, and nodded. “I translate, honored fighter Farran.”

Later, back in their room at the inn, Rin couldn’t resist asking Girey. “More meat?”

He flushed nicely under his tan. “More substance. There’s… more to you. Why didn’t you tell him you spoke Bitrani?”

“Some of my substance, I’d rather not share all around.” She glanced at the single bed again, and then at the hard floor with its thin rug. “Come to bed, Girey. ‘More meat,’ indeed.”

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Further Discussion Follows, a story of Rin & Girey for the Giraffe Call.

The $35-level continuation story from the November Giraffe Call.

This is in the Reiassan Setting, which has a landing page here (and on LJ). It comes after everything else I’ve written in timeline for Rin & Girey, and directly after/during Mother Knows… (LJ) and Encountering Dad (LJ)

“Are you going to marry him?”

Rin blinked at her mother for a moment, and then shook her head, laughing at herself. She’d been out of Lannamer too long, away from politics, intrigue, away from watching what you said. Away from schooling your face and voice.

“Well?” Her mother was smirking faintly, suggesting she’d read every thought as it moved across Rin’s mind. “Are you going to marry your nice young man? Keep him as a bedwarmer? Use him as a clerk?”

“That’s quite a lot of questions for someone you’ve only met in passing, Ina.”

“You’ve had him in the palace complex for three days, Arinyanca. That’s enough for the word to get out. He’s quiet, but he speaks Callanthe very well, and when he shifts into Bitrani, his accent is crisp and upper-class. He’s a Duke’s son, well-bred, and the people who notice such things think he’s clever. You’ve got him dolled up like a court-dancer, and he fits it very well, but his hands have sword-callouses and his shoulders and arms are very broad.”

“They speak quite a bit about him, the gossips,” she answered mildly, worrying at the stab of jealousy like a loose cuticle.

“There’s quite a bit of speculation. That kiss had people talking within moments.”

“It was a very nice kiss,” she smiled. “He has nice lips.”

“And are you going to marry him? With Elen’s wedding today, it becomes more a more and urgent question.”

“I know,” she nodded, “and I don’t know.”

Arinya’s father pulled the scroll out of its case and rolled it out on the table. “She can be a wild one, my Rinnie,” he confided, “although I’m betting you’ve found that out already. Where was it she captured you?”

Girey colored uncomfortably, and stared at the scroll rather than look the older man in the face. “On the front. Just outside of Ouyknan. I was riding the line in the evening, and she was, too, both looking for wounded.”

“She got the drop on you?” The man sounded sympathetic. “Well, there are a lot worse things that can happen, coming out of a war like that one.”

Girey nodded slowly, more than a little reluctantly. “I suppose you’re right, sir.”

“It’s Egarengar. You can call me Gar. We’re practically family, after all.” He looked up with a very sharp glance at Girey. “Aren’t we, Girey of… Tugia?”

He didn’t like that hesitation. “So your daughter tells me, sir,” he answered evenly. “And she’s in charge.” He fingered the plaque bracelet around his wrist uncomfortably.

Egarengar glanced at the bracelet. “Ah, that,” he smiled. “I wondered if she’d taken it with her. I carved it for her, you know.”

“You did?” He looked at the bracelet again, wondering if he’d ever understand these people. “Why?”

“There’s old superstitions around these things. That if you want to bring home certain qualities, you ask someone with those traits to carve the band.”

“Well,” Inatalana offered, leaning forward, “what will it take for you to be certain? He’s a handsome man, Arinya. And he seems fond of you.”

“He does,” she admitted. “That’s new. He started out hating me, which is to be expected. If our quitari had been on backwards, if I had been the one being captured, I think I would have hated him, too.”

“Marriages have started from shakier foundation than that,” her mother offered. “Arinya, I know I’m sounding pushy, but there have not been all that many men that you’ve expressed an interest in. There was that nice scholar, when you were at University, but that didn’t seem to go anywhere. And then you joined the army.”

“And then I joined the army,” she agreed. It covered all of it, after all: the time away from Lannamer and the palace, the men around her who were not, for the most part, royal, the lack of time for the games of spouse-hunting. “And with Elen’s marriage…” Damn Elen, anyway, for her bad timing. “I’d hoped to have more time to see how he fit in here.”

“So it was part of your plan, then, the possibility of marrying him?” That seemed to reassure Ina.

“It’s been on my mind. He was young and cocky when I captured him, not really what I was looking for. But he seems to have mellowed out over the trip, and I think I’m starting to like him.”

“And it’s clear he comes from a good bloodline.”

Girey stared at the bracelet for a few minutes, and then looked back up at Egarengar. There was a lump of something like hope and something like horror in his throat, but he didn’t want to admit to this stranger any of that. “So you were hoping she’d capture someone?” he asked instead.

“Or find someone. That doesn’t mean quite what I think you think it does, that band.”

“I’m starting to see that. What – what qualities…” he stumbled in his Callenian for the first time in months, and frowned, frustrated, spitting out a few muttered complaints in Bitrani.

“Yes, it is a tongue-twisting language when you get into the interpersonal stuff. I’ve found that Bitrani is much cleaner for that, but it has much less opportunity for nuance.” He still sounded sympathetic, and a little bit amused. “I can’t speak as to what qualities I have, but I can tell you what she said she was looking for. If you think it will help.”

He tugged angrily at the sleeves of his strange, foreign tunic. “Nothing is going to help. She caught me.”

“And you followed her into Lannamer. That’s loyalty.”

“Nowhere else to go.”

“Pragmaticism is not the worst of motives by far.” He pointed at the scroll again. “If I read this correctly, this tells of how a Bitrani King wooed his captive Callanthe wife.”

Girey read the phrase in question. “I am not sure about the word ‘woo,’” he offered cautiously.

“Much like she ‘wooed’ you, mmm?”

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Character Development Meme (morning Warmup), Questions 7 and 8

As discussed here and on LJ, I’m going to do this meme for a few characters (I’m rotating seasonal sibs to not totally overwhelm myself).

Questions 5 & 4 are here and on LJ.

7.) Is there one event or happening your character would like to erase from their past? Why?

Spring (well, really, all 4 RoundTree Siblings): Their father’s death. Dad RoundTree died when Mom was pregnant with Spring, leaving Winter as parental figure for his three little sisters (Mom’s not all that good at the parenting thing). The three that remember him miss him horribly, and Spring has always felt his loss.

Conrad: I’d have to say that what happened to Kai with Anatoliy wins here. He’s had a pretty easy life, even up to his first year of Addergoole

Rin: Hrm. This one is harder. Rin’s seen a number of deaths she couldn’t prevent, and handled any number of really unpleasant situations. I don’t think any one of those stands out to her, however.

8.) Day of Favorites! What’s your character’s favorite ice cream flavor? Color? Song? Flower?

Spring: Rocky Road, Green, “Hate Me,” Orchid
Summer: Chocolate, Pink (yes, really), the soundtrack to Rent, roses
Autumn: Maple Walnut, Red, Something loud and full of fiddles, and irises.
Winter: Vanilla, White (or blue), Mozart, Crocuses.

Rin: they don’t have ice cream. Her favorite colors are green and blue. She likes the marching songs, although she’ll rarely admit it, and she loves the snowblossoms that grown on the cold sides of the mountains.

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Character Development Meme (morning Warmup), Questions 5 and 6

As discussed here and on LJ, I’m going to do this meme for a few characters (I’m rotating seasonal sibs to not totally overwhelm myself).

Questions 3 & 4 are here and on LJ.

Questions 7 & 8 are here and on LJ.

5.) What’s your character’s ranking on the KINSEY SCALE?

Spring: Varies depending on her mood
Summer: 3
Autumn: 2
Winter: 0

Conrad: I get the feeling about a low 1.

Rin: I’m really not certain. She’s not a very high sex-drive character any way you slice it, but probably about a 1-2.

6.) Describe your character’s happiest memory.

Winter: Winter being who he is, his happiest memory is one colored bittersweet. He was about five years old, sitting on the dock at the family cottage. The whole family was there: his parents, his mother’s mother, and his two little sisters. Autumn, about three then, was drawing pictures in the puddles of water on the dock. Summer was tiny, under a year old, and Winter was holding her in his arms, as he leaned against his father.

“Hold her carefully,” his dad murmured. “They’re a great responsibility, little sisters, and often great difficulty,” the latter as Summer tried to squirm out of his arms. “You have to know just how much to hold them, and when it’s time to let go.”

Conrad: (can I pick a memory in the future? No? Hrmm.) Everything right now for Conrad is covered by the bliss-bond of making his Keeper happy, but a memory from before the storyline…
… kicking a ball around the Village field with Cassidy and Vlad, the summer between years Four and Five. Just hanging out, not talking about anything all that important.

Rin: In a temple in an ocean-side city, her apprentice as a healer finished, she stood over her first solo patient, a woman of middling years who had injured her leg in a fishing accident. Slowly, patiently, Rin brought forth the energy, and coaxed the body to heal itself.

When she awoke, the grateful fisherwoman, generally an reserved type from an reserved group, hugged Rin tightly against her chest in thanks, and gifted her with a small, delicately-woven pendant of copper replicating a fishing net in miniature. She carries this pendant with her in her packs, only pulling it out for special occasions.

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Character Development Meme (morning Warmup), Questions 3 and 4

As discussed here and on LJ, I’m going to do this meme for a few characters (I’m rotating seasonal sibs to not totally overwhelm myself).

Feel free to suggest another character, and I’ll work through them in rotation.

Question 2 here and on LJ.

Questions 5 and 6 are here and here on LJ.

3.) Name one scar your character has, and tell us where it came from. If they don’t have any, is there a reason?

Summer: Summer had an active, wild childhood, and, as such, has more than a few of those childhood scraped-knee and cut-hand scars. More notable is one across her collarbone, gotten when a piece of a set fell on her, nail-side down.

Conrad: most noticeable on Conrad is his nose, which was broken and not healed properly in his teens (soccer accident). He’s gotten in a few training scrapes since coming to Addergoole, but those heal scarless.

Rin: Rin is a healer. She bears no scars on her skin because she’s healed them all.

4.) How vain is your character? Do they find themselves attractive?

Autumn: Autumn is not a narcissist, but she’s a flirt, in a profession that encourages flirtation, and in subcultures that really encourage flirtation. She knows what she’d got, and she likes showing it off; she dresses to that end most of the time. Although she will not sacrifice practicality for vanity, she also won’t sacrifice vanity for practicality.

Conrad isn’t particularly vain. He knows he’s decent-looking, but in Addergoole that’s mostly a function of not getting a bad Change. No-one there is all that unattractive on base.

He attributes his skill with girls – Kai is certainly not his first girlfriend – more to social finesse and less to his appearance.

Rin: Rin has her mother’s nose, her grandmother’s hair, and a family chin. She exemplifies the royal phenotype, looking like a Callanthe and a royal. On some level, she knows this makes her look attractive, especially to other Callanthe, and she’s spent enough time in Bithrain to know that, there, this makes her exotic.

She takes enough care of her appearance to not let down what people expect of her as a healer, as a member of the army, or as a princess, depending on what role she’s filling at the moment.

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Encountering Dad, a story of Rin & Girey for the Giraffe Call

For LilFluff‘s prompt.

This is in the Reiassan Setting, which has a landing page here (and on LJ). It comes after everything else I’ve written in timeline for Rin & Girey, and directly after/during Mother Knows… ()

“I need to visit my parents,” Rin-Arinya-Arinyanca had declared. They had only been in the palace complex for a few days, but Girey had already learned that, much as when they were on the road, “I am going somewhere” quickly became “we are going somewhere.”

In this case, it was, at least, reasonable. They were attending Elenerja’s wedding that afternoon, already dressed for it in Callanthe finery. This was, in theory, just a brief stop.

Nothing these people did was brief, any more than anything they touched was dull-colored. They could turn dinner into a three-hour affair with the slightest provocation. The wedding was supposed to last from sundown until sun-up, with a week-long celebration afterwards. He’d asked “how do you people ever get anything done?” only to receive a cryptic “we’re very efficient” as an answer.

He followed her into her parents’ suite with more than a little trepidation. So far, people had been either nice or politely chilly, but those were family members, cousins, aunts, uncles. This was her parents. The parents of the woman whose captive he was. It was…

“Oh, you must be Arinya’s Bitrani captive.” A big hand clapped him on the shoulder. “I’ve got an ancient Bitrani artifact I want to ask you about.”

“Uh… sure, sir.” He glanced at the hand – not all that big, by Bitrani standards, but for Callanthe the man was a giant – and then at the man, who was as tall as Girey was, green-eyed, and smiling fiercely. He collected himself, with a stern mental reminder that he was a prince, not a yokel, and ought to act like it, and stood up straight. “Where to?”

“Right here, into my study.” He steered Girey firmly through the door, then shut it with a solid thud behind them. Wood doors, Girey noted, and heavy – they might have far too many heirs, but they certainly lived like royalty.

“There,” the man smiled. This room was paneled in stone, with drawers, boxes, and shelves filling every spot. “I do have an ancient Bitrani artifact – it’s a scroll – though I know you’re a soldier and not a scholar. But Irri and Rinnie are going to go off about things that, frankly, bore me and likely bore you too. So I thought I’d get you out of there.”

“…Thanks?”

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Character Development Meme (morning Warmup), Question 2

As discussed here and on LJ, I’m going to do this meme for a few characters (I’m rotating seasonal sibs to not totally overwhelm myself).

Feel free to suggest another character, and I’ll work through them in rotation.

Question 1 here and on LJ.

Question 3 here and on LJ.

2.) What are your characters most prominent physical features?

The RoundTree Siblings:
They share a stubborn chin they inherited from their father and a strong nose they got from their mother, a build that is sturdy or athletic rather than willowy, and a medium height that is neither tiny not giant.

Winter’s hair went prematurely white (his sisters blame Spring); he wears it long and in a ponytail, and it’s arrow-straight.

Autumn’s hair is a curly mess of russet, which she wears mostly-loose.

Summer’s hair is golden blonde, and as straight as Winter’s. It spends much of its time in a ponytail.

Spring’s hair is dirty blonde, light brown, and worn feathered and, no surprise, a little chaotic.

Conrad: The tail is probably the most notable, and his oversized, extra-digits-and-knuckles hands and feet. With his Mask hiding those Changes, the hands and feet are still oversized, and his once-broken nose and blue, blue eyes stand out more strongly.

Rin: Rin is a model of her ethnicity, as is not all that surprising from a member of the royal family. Her long black hair and small mouth with its rather generous smile are most notable; her skin is a light mocha-tan in the cold season, but, after several seasons at war and on the road, is burnished to a dark very-slightly-olive tan.

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Character Development Meme (morning Warmup), Question 1

As discussed here and on LJ, I’m going to do this meme for a few characters (I’m rotating seasonal sibs to not totally overwhelm myself).

Feel free to suggest another character, and I’ll work through them in rotation.

Question 2 here and on LJ.

(1) Describe your character’s relationship with their mother or their father, or both. Was it good? Bad? Were they spoiled rotten, ignored? Do they still get along now, or no?

Spring: Spring never knew her father; he died when she was still in the womb. Her relationship with her mother is at times very wild – Mrs. RoundTree has distinct ideas about where her children’s lives should be going, and, as a tangler, especially, Spring is very good at countering that. She was a wild kid, who turned to her brother as a father figure, and in a pinch, she’s much more likely to go to Winter or Autumn than to Mom for help.

Conrad: He doesn’t know who his father is, although a year and a half at Addergoole has led him to assume it’s someone in Regine’s breeding program. His mother, Maria, did her best to raise him well, with the help of her older brother and her father. He has a distant-but-okay relationship with his mother, with some small amount of resentment that he keeps very very deeply buried for sending him to Addergoole; he gets along well with his grandfather, and his uncle taught him most of the “manly” skills that come in handy so rarely at Addergoole.

Rin: She’s the seventh daughter in a family of nine, not spoiled but not ignored either. Her mother is more or less professional royalty; she’s never left Lannamer and rarely leaves the palace complex. Her father is a bureaucrat and a businessman who manages portions of the royal finances and helps to keep the roads going and the weapons heading out. Neither are particularly strong in the faith/magic of that world, and neither are of a particularly military or scholarly bent. They approved of Rin’s time in university, but are a little lost by her decision to go military. She, in turn, thinks fondly of them, but with not a great deal of respect.

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Mother Knows… a story of Rin & Girey, for the Giraffe Call @inventrix

For kelkyag‘s prompt.

This is in the Reiassan Setting, which has a landing page here (and on LJ). It comes after everything else I’ve written in timeline for Rin & Girey.

Short version of the story – Rin has been at war, acting as a healer in the Callanthe army. The Callanthe beat the Bitrani (this time), and she took as a prisoner of war the Bitrani noble Girey. Hijinks ensue.

Rin’s father had pulled Girey out of the room the minute they’d arrived, with something that sounded like “I want to ask you about this ancient Bitrani artifact.” It had left Rin and her mother alone, sipping tea and staring out her parents’ large picture window at the city below.

“What was it like?” Watching her mother’s face, Rin was reminded that the older Princess had never left Lannamer, much less gone to war. She’d come of age in a rare time of peace and been married before battle was declared again, busy producing heirs for the throne.

“It was… dirty,” she offered. “Busy, dangerous, sometimes too cold and sometimes too hot. But mostly it was dirty.” She wondered if she was trying to make it sound more unpleasant than it had been for her mother’s benefit.

“But you stayed long past your first tour of duty.”

“They needed me. They needed healers, and I’m a very good healer.”

“You could have led them.”

“I could have, but there were other people suited to leadership. There weren’t that many suited to healing.”

“And what are you going to do now?”

Rin plucked at her formal qitari. “I’m going to attend Elin’s wedding, and smile, and wish her well.”

“That will do for the next three days. Are you going to rejoin the army?”

“I thought about it,” she admitted. “But…”

Her mother smiled at her. “I know that expression. Forgive a mother meddling, dear, but I have some suggestions for you.”

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Ghosts of Memory – Rin/Girey – Giraffe Call

For kelkyag‘s prompt.

Reiassan. Reisassn has a landing page – here (or on LJ)

Probably after Bed-Warmer (LJ) but maybe after after Enemy, in which case the first paragraph will have to change.

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Rin had gone, over the week after they left Ossulund, from whistling to thoughtful, with glances at Girey he was pretty sure she didn’t think he noticed. That suited him; he had his own thoughts to ponder.

Sarella, the pretty little blonde who had more than a little cause to remember him fondly and fair reason to expect him to rescue her, had gotten him thinking. The thoughts weren’t the most comfortable, either, chafing like his shirt no longer did, now that Rin had dressed him up like a Callanthe noble.

“So what’s the difference?” he asked her back, in a sunny moment of quiet on the trail.

“The difference?” She hadn’t even jumped, but she did frown back at him.

“You said that your people don’t keep slaves.” He jangled his chains at her. “But you take captives.”

“A slave is a possession, yes?” she asked, her Bitrani, as always, careful and stilted. “But a captive has a chance of being anything.”

“But you’re not going to take your prisoners of war and put them to work running your towns, for instance. You have war-brides like Sarella – the girl in Ossulund? In Bitrani, we’d call her a slave. And you have captives like me.” And he wasn’t going to think about the possibility that his position might be the same as Sarella’s. “What about the rest of them?” What were they doing with his countrymen? “You told that farmer he’d go back to his family. Is that common practice?”

Now, she turned to regard him with a strange look, one he hadn’t seen on her face before. On a Bitrani officer, he’d think it was respect, but from her, he couldn’t be certain. “Enlisted men, yes,” she answered carefully. “Farmers, workers, Their families and villages need them.”

“Good.” He paused, thinking about that for a moment, before he added “Thank you.”

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